Envelope Poem
The night time catches meI tried to sleep
The feeling of eyes watching me
My feet tiptoeing on the floor
A shadow shushes past
Coming closer and closer
The night time catches me
Friday, June 26, 2020
Watch out, its another poem!
I tried to sleep
The feeling of eyes watching me
My feet tiptoeing on the floor
A shadow shushes past
Coming closer and closer
The night time catches me
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Wow Mak, that’s one chilling poem - I’m glad it came with a warning.
ReplyDeleteActually I love your poem - you write very well although it did leave me feeling a little creeped out!
Have you ever had that feeling of being watched in the dark?
This is amazing Mak!
ReplyDeleteYou used amazing descriptive words that really helped paint the pitcher.
Great job!
-Clara
hi Mak
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing I love the title it is really catchy
I also like how you set it out it is easy to read
nice work
-Charlotte