My Poem
I was alone
and weak
Sleeping
on a chill night
I was alone
and weak
Sleeping
on a chill night
I was a pupil at Rāwhiti School and this blog is where I shared my learning. This blog has been archived, no further content will be uploaded or added. You are welcome to continue viewing posts, however commenting has been disabled.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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That sounds like a fun thing to do Makenzie. Did you find it hard or easy? Your poems great.
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Good job Mak! I would give you some helpful criticism but nothing was wrong with it. Keep the great work up!
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